Draft 3/ blog post no.3 - Q2

 


People's lives were split into two: the indigenous communities residing in the high mountains and those living in the lowlands who experience more modernization. Individuals mistreat Indigenous people due to their appearances and mannerisms, yet all they desire is to live as they wish. Despite all of the difficulties they encounter, they still wish to preserve the cultural heritage passed down from their ancestors. 


Those native individuals assist us not only in surviving but their shared knowledge greatly aids us. Indigenous individuals are human beings too; despite our differences, we all share humanity, so treating indigenous people poorly is also a violation of human rights. 



In this regard, honor the indigenous people by not just the name but who really they’re, we must make a world where everyone feel comfortable and equality is what we need. 

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  1. JoshuaDecember 12, 2024 at 5:27 PM

    Change you're title related to you're topic

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  2. DivineDecember 15, 2024 at 6:03 PM

    Include pictures and try to be more creative with your title to catch readers' attention.

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  3. preciousDecember 17, 2024 at 1:35 PM

    Hello ^^! it's nice to know that you've learned a lot this second quarter, but your title is missing something. I suggest to make your title more interesting and add some pictures to catch you readers attention. Have a nice day^^

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